Crusters123

I am in the process of rewriting the Miraculous X Ninjago crossover I have published! Just letting y’all know if you keep getting updates of me posting the same chapter or something like that for that specific story!

51m0n54y5

I always wondered, if the fake monsters they unmasked was real? how would that go down? For Char Gar Gothakon, he would be like a Tulpa since he was a monster that Hatecraft created

51m0n54y5

How do you think that would have egon if the monsters they unmasked were real, ten maybe they would have to find a way to stop the monsters, which would have been very cool!
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51m0n54y5

I kind of feel like Splinter was favoring Varian a little bit in Chapter 3 with this:“Oh, I did not realize he said mean things. Of course, you two had no choice but to jeopardize your mission.” Master Splinter’s tall figure hovers over Varian and Raph.
          
          “Sorry, dad,” Varian quickly apologizes, shutting his eyes and bowing his head to the floor in respect.
          
          Splinter sees his son’s fear and sighs. He pats the boy’s head then goes back to scolding, this time less angry than before. “You are ninjas. You work in the shadows, in secret. This becomes difficult if there is proof of your existence in high-definition.”

Crusters123

True. Splinter does tend to favorite Varian in this AU a bit due to Varian being the only human, and the only one who can lead a normal life that reminds Splinter of his past. With Varian being the least powerful and the one who’s constantly always getting hurt, Splinter is more protective of him than he is of the turtles, because he knows that they are stronger than him and can take care of themselves. Not to say that he doesn’t love the turtles as well.
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51m0n54y5

Did Splinter ever find out that his turtle son's went out and walked in public pretending to be kids wearing costumes and got on photo

51m0n54y5

Given Hank's character, I bet he's going to be disappointed so many times when the mysteries are solved and everytime it is not a real monster
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51m0n54y5

You don't have to write it if you don't want to, just a funny little thought
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51m0n54y5

I had a funny thought if he did find out if Varian was for some reason showing Splinter the internet, and now Splinter sees something weird, "Varian, click on that photo right there."And Varian does, and right there they both widen their eyes when they see the turtles taking a selfie with the humans, and nervously Varian looked at his father, who looked like he was about to explode, and Varian took that as a sign to get the hell out, as he said in a nervous happy tone, "Oh, wow, I am exhausted! see you tomorrow, Dad! Goodnight!" And race walks out of the dojo, cringing from hearing his father shout for his brothers, "BOYS! GET IN HERE, RIGHT NOW!"
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Crusters123

Here’s is the link to the Mystery Incorporated AU tumblr that my friend and I are running this on!
          
          https://www.tumblr.com/mystery-incorporated-au

Crusters123

@51m0n54y5 also, do you mind if I post this question on the Tumblr I made for this rewrite/AU??
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Crusters123

That’s a great question!! The story is definitely going to be a mature version because my friend and I thought it best, especially since the show itself is very dark for a children’s audience back in 2010. We thought it best for the gang to be mature in this AU/Rewrite, which does mean profanity will be included. Not so much that it makes the character’s whole outlook different, but to the point where it feels realistic. Like, after all, they are teenagers and in this day and age, it’s not that strange to hear one use foul language/curse words. I, myself, though not a teen anymore, use it practically all the time out of habit and being too used to hearing them from family/friends. So yes, this will be more mature version of the beloved show, but we will do our best to make it as great as the original source material!
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51m0n54y5

You don't have to answer right now, but what kind of stuff are you planning to rewrite about the show?

Crusters123

New OCs, plenty of filler episodes, new monsters, and extra planispheric discs for the new OCs
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Crusters123

I HERE TO MAKE AN ANNOUNCEMENT!!!!!
          A friend and I will be making a rewrite/AU of the Scooby-Doo Mystery Incorporated show from 2010 (check it out, that show is PEAK)!!! I will be posting this on my Wattpad and my AO3. I will make sure to let y'all know about updates and when things will be (hopefully) posted for this book!!
          love y'all! have a nice day, evening, whatever time you're in!!

51m0n54y5

Just read the 4th chapter and Wow Varian must be terrified of Shredder

51m0n54y5

Does Varian ever bring up moments where it says that he still hasn't gotten over the incident and Raph would ask, "How many times do I have to say I'm sorry?"
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Crusters123

@51m0n54y5 I don’t think so. Probably not a memory the two are very fond of, especially considering how upset Splinter got over Varian getting hurt.
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51m0n54y5

Did Raph and Varian ever bring the sparring incident back up with Raph's sai going into Varian's arm
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