ToSeeIsToBend

Morning
          
          Solid read, I say it's pretty solid but try to add a description of the environment to help the tone and mood of the story, setting is important too, if u want to ask me anything go ahead. There's always a way like a wise person taught me

Cryingrainbows2025

They have settings dw, but for a oneshot they are supposed to be like that, don’t be alarmed <3
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Cryingrainbows2025

I have like 10+ other fics that arnt published yet
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ToSeeIsToBend

but yeah try to find a way to include the setting a little
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