Cryptic_Fiction

Good news, the third arc of the Spider-Man re-write is now finished! Will again start uploading it in batches starting next week.
          	
          	Its following the Kingpin story from the original story all be it longer, more personal stakes and a team up with the a certain devil both in and out of court.
          	The arc will be focused around the trial of Spider-Man as Y/N's web of illegal activites has finallg caught up to him. 
          	
          	The villains of course is Kingpin and his empire but expect a few suprises along the way. This was also the part in the stort when the black suit was introduced. 
          	
          	Ill leave you with that thought heh.
          	
          	Look forwards to it

Cryptic_Fiction

Good news, the third arc of the Spider-Man re-write is now finished! Will again start uploading it in batches starting next week.
          
          Its following the Kingpin story from the original story all be it longer, more personal stakes and a team up with the a certain devil both in and out of court.
          The arc will be focused around the trial of Spider-Man as Y/N's web of illegal activites has finallg caught up to him. 
          
          The villains of course is Kingpin and his empire but expect a few suprises along the way. This was also the part in the stort when the black suit was introduced. 
          
          Ill leave you with that thought heh.
          
          Look forwards to it

RomeoJaramillo

Hey dude I have a request if you want to hear it if not then that's cool I understand, wait did we already talk about this?

Cryptic_Fiction

@RomeoJaramillo I don't do requests. I've got enough on my plate to throw on other people's stories. I always state that if you have an idea, make it yourself! Let the creative juices flow, go for it!
Balas

Cryptic_Fiction

Good news, I just finished the 2nd arc of the Spider-Man re-write. Just finishing up the editing but I should have the next 18 chapters out next week. This is from the ground up a new story taking aspects of the original but going to 11. The villains this time round? Otto, Kraven and the Hero Killer Stain.

fanofthef1c

(Long post warning)
          
          Brakethough, on the out of order chapters on the mha story ((ultra resposonabiltys)at least in my opinion)
          So apparently it's a mobile only issue if your confused on this the mha academia story (ultra resposonabiltys)  the chapters are out of order but for some reason it's a mobile only thing as to why I don't know but I thought I should make a post to let you all know if your unaware  of this issue i have a screen shot of the mobile side of things to show you the prof but don't blame cryptic since they were unaware and had no idea this was happening till it was pointed out and is probably a whattpad thing. How did I find out this info I logged into the site via PC device and was fine there so it's definitely a mobile only issue (as far as I'm aware 
          

fanofthef1c

@fanofthef1c I unintentionally found a fix to this issue (unintentionally) so how i did it was by logging out of this account to one i bealy use to see if this issue was on that one and is wasn't since the chapters was in order there i came back to this one and the order was fixed so to fix this (at least from what I found) is just log out then log back in or swap accounts and swap back (not to sure which one yet also this was from my own experience so it may differ)
Balas

fanofthef1c

i should add that this was when i did it i don't know if its the same with everyone else but it's so that's all i got to say on this matter
Balas

Cryptic_Fiction

Happy Early New Year! I mentioned a few days ago that I was rewriting my Spider-Man x MHA story. I would have gone ahead full steam ahead. The story is now unpublished, but don't worry, the first arc of 18 chapters will be back up tomorrow in two batches. The first 13 chapters will be published on 31st while the last 5 chapters on the 1st
          
          What is changing? 
          Basic stuff like grammar improvements, pacing and other things are a give.
          The first 7 chapters are largely the same however, after chapter 7, it all changes
          
          The biggest change Spider-Man's identity will no longer be found out and he won't join UA in the first arc. No UA getting attacked by Electro; everyone finding out Y/N is Spider-Man; no lawyering up to join UA and the USJ attack.
          This will come much later in the story. I've written 25 chapters so far, and his identity remains a secret.
          
          I got quite a few complaints about this aspect of the character dropping too soon, and I agree. I've taken quite a lot of feedback on board and have adapted.
          
          More MHA characters will appear. Think characters like Muscular, AFO, Stain and so on. While in the original story,y Spider-Man's rogue gallery got a big part, the MHA villains did not. Don't worry, villains on both ends will be making appearance,s as well as more Spider-Man villains like Screwball in Arc 1
          
          Gwen is cut from the story, replaced with an all-new character. She had no part in the story until the last section, and I think I'll keep her tied to the Spider-Verse story.
          
          There are other changes; most I'll keep a surprise, but I will be adapting all the missing arcs from MHA, like the Overhaul Arc, My Villain Academia with Norman instead of Shigaraki, the War of Japan, and the remaining movies that didn't get adapted.
          
          With all the changes, it's looking to double the run time. 
          If you've already read the story, get ready to be surprised all over again with new plots, characters and a longer black suit arc.
          See you all tomorrow and into the new year.

TommyImbianchino

@Cryptic_Fiction then i'll just wait and hope
Balas

Cryptic_Fiction

@TommyImbianchino No of course not. Shes not going to be killed at chapter 86 by the Chameleon no sir i would never
Balas