landosleftshoe
Hey I just posted the first chapter of my first book. If you don't mind could you check it out and maybe give me some feedback? If not that's ok. ❤️
CrystalKaitlyn
I love your book so far! As feedback, I think it would be good if you focused on improving your grammar <3 It’s something I need to work on too and it really makes people’s work sound so much better! Make sure to check out my book as well ‼️
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