ooooohhhhhh....
its nice. the rough draft isn't rough for enough. author, you're just being humble. I borrowed an account just to read and compare the early chapters of book 1 and its not too much actually. Punctuation marks to give a pause and feelings to each statement. Adding more words to give a life-like momentum. If there's a word definition I could give to the book, it would be raw and not rough. This book is like a gem, a raw gem hidden beneath the archives of wp.
if the earliest book is a gem, how much more the polished books, eh? I'm not surprise the series would be like this, locked like other WP OGs. I've read many apocalyptic books especially in chinese to english translated platforms, but this series could rival the best books I've red so far.
Seriously, in apocalyptic genres, one should concentrate in adventure, suspense, horror, mystery and scifi.
and my favorite phrase in apocalyptic genre books is
"Life is all about movement. You move, you live. You don't move and stay in one place, you die."
seriously?! those who left behind either they betrayed their comrades to let the other group become prey of the Z and vice versa..
..or just some kind of heroes who intent to sacrifice theirselves.