Crystal Small

Also I wanted to make clear that I'll be removing the current chapter when I post up the next one, I'm thinking I'll leave each chapter up a week, so please check back for farther installments

I needed to get my story in order so that I can begin to connect the dots and fill in the gaps I know it has.  I have unpublished all parts and am now republishing a part at a time in the actual order of events. 
           This is still not and edited version in truth as I know I have to go back and clean it up, and re-write bits, but I'm inviting critique and even votes if you think that it is worthy of voting for.
          I truly hope you enjoy my story and thank you all for following me.

"Some days it don't come easy
          Some days it don't come hard
          Some days it don't come at all, and these are the days that never end
          Some nights you're breathing fire
          Some nights you're carved in ice
          Some nights you're like nothing I've ever seen before or will again"
          Writing for me always feels this way..
          soon as I walk away to do something else though, something I have to put down will pop into my head.
          Word count today is only 88 thus far, but I'm looking for another post lunch, or dinner, or what ever meal it is (I don't pay attention when writing LOL) burst of inspiration like yesterday.  So here *raises a glass* is to hoping

I have unpublished the unrevised version and republish what I have revised thus far. I didn't actually plan to revise till it was finished, but found my self revising as I tried to pick the thread of the story back up so see the new copy below to continue reading  along on my NaNoWriMo journey

So a few things took me away from writing, thus no updates lately. How ever in order to get back into my story I decided to go back and flesh out a few of the scenes I knew I had sort of glossed over initially just to get to the next part before I lost the thread of it so to speak.  I'm feeling much happier with how they play out now After going back and taking a look at my notes, I'm ready to move forward. I have a lot of words to make up so look for some big updates to come.

This is for NaNoWriMo, so you are literally seeing a work in progress from day to day as I write it. Criticism constructive or other wise is not at this time wished for as I do realize it needs editing, rewrites etc.  If how ever you do wish to say something general Like; It's difficult to follow please explain more what is going on or, your characters don't seem very real to me or, your dialog sucks. Well then at least I know what direction to go w/ said rewrites.  Though that last comment would be kind of mean.