I wasn't happy with how my second chapter was written, and neither were the people reading it. I also realized that due to the long gap between me writing the first and second chapters, there were quite a few inconsistencies and things I hadn't made up my mind on.
I am implementing a new writing process to fix this. I will write the full chapter, then leave it unpublished for a few days. After coming back to it, I will edit it and release it if it seems good. This will cause more delay between updates on the book, but it will result in higher quality overall.
Also, I am now writing down my ideas and the timeline of events on a storyboard ahead of time so I can make sure I keep details straight and consistent. As always, feel free to give feedback on everything I release. Thanks!