Hey guys! You guys can call me avo! Welcome to my account! Im very new to this and very excited to show a story I've been working on. It's definitely a work in progress and I'd love to hear feedback from you all! I think everyone can already notice how happy I am just by looking at all the exclamation marks I've already used. Please comment on, and rate my story and send me all the compliments and/or criticism you've got! Theres for sure room for improvement and I want to learn from my mistakes. If you guys already enjoy "The Land of Dor" so far, please share the story so I can motivate myself to write more. Thank you!