CustodianGuardian

Hey there, I currently don't have a private Discord & Gmail account & I'm in no real rush to make one. If any of y'all have questions or ideas, just comment under the chapter you're currently reading or under my post.  Thanks. 

cvrsedqwe

Are you using AI to correct your texts?
          (Im not blaming, I really like the plot but.... The type of writing kinda repepetitive and strange, its really not that good)

CustodianGuardian

@cvrsedqwe Hey, I really appreciate you sharing that. I don’t mind using other tools or methods either. I definitely don’t want AI writing the story for me. I use it more for polishing and structure, not to build the whole plot. The characters and direction are mine.
            
            If you’ve got tips on how you personally catch repeated lines or repetitive phrasing in your own writing, I’d honestly love to hear them. I’m always trying to improve and tighten things up.
            
            Thanks again for taking the time to give feedback and for sticking around for the sequel! It means a lot & I'd like to hear your thoughts on what you've read! 
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cvrsedqwe

@CustodianGuardian , oh I see. I use them to correct but I use other AI and compare text to get better result, as I can see it sometimes making some additives to your text and it quite simillar and repepetitive and it makes the whole text kinda repepetitive and it becomes hard to read. I can give u some other AI to help u, u also can use website "arena ai" it have a lot of other models u can use, and there u can see AI tier list. Im russian and I really like to share my ideas with people and I use AI to translate my texts, I dont like when AI does some additives. For me, best models to help u with ur texts is gemini-3-pro and claude opus-4.6. In my opinion AI is really good tool to help you with texts, not making the whole plot. I also wait for more chapters for your sequel
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CustodianGuardian

@CustodianGuardian I meant I only use chatgpt to correct my spelling & grammar. The rest is all on me XD
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Gabriel_The_Wall

Huh...is everything okay boss?
          
          You there?

Gabriel_The_Wall

Oh, good to know that everything is alright.
            
            Regarding your question, if you're going to do a flashback, now is the best time since Renz has just returned from his failed search for Amo (meaning he'll continue working for Madam, This implies that the story will slow down for now. So it would be good to introduce the exposition before more excitement comes in).
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CustodianGuardian

@Gabriel_The_Wall if I may get your input. I've been wanting to do a flashback for a chapter to 2 chapters at most before. but I dont want the flashback to derail the story. (The flashback does have relevance to the story) What do you think?
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CustodianGuardian

@Gabriel_The_Wall No worries, I'm okay XD. Life has been very busy as of the last few days but dont worry. I still plan on writing this story as its always on my mind. 
            I even have half the next chapter writing! 
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Gabriel_The_Wall

Great job so far with your story, my friend. Without a doubt, you're one of the best writers I've found on this site.

CustodianGuardian

@Gabriel_The_Wall thank you so much for the high praise! It makes me so happy you stuck around & continued to support! I hope the conclusion of the story will meet your expectations! 
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