@CustodianGuardian
hello, are u okay?
@cvrsedqwe Hey! Yeah, I'm fine. Thanks for asking! Life has been a bit busy as of late so apologize for the late response My next chapter should be out soon so I'm really happy about that!
Are you using AI to correct your texts?
(Im not blaming, I really like the plot but.... The type of writing kinda repepetitive and strange, its really not that good)
@cvrsedqwe Hey, I really appreciate you sharing that. I don’t mind using other tools or methods either. I definitely don’t want AI writing the story for me. I use it more for polishing and structure, not to build the whole plot. The characters and direction are mine. If you’ve got tips on how you personally catch repeated lines or repetitive phrasing in your own writing, I’d honestly love to hear them. I’m always trying to improve and tighten things up. Thanks again for taking the time to give feedback and for sticking around for the sequel! It means a lot & I'd like to hear your thoughts on what you've read!
@CustodianGuardian You can use website "arena ai". It provides free use of best LLM agents like claude opus 4.6 (which is the best for writing currently) if u still find your texts kinda repepetitive, u can use QuillBot to Humanize your text.
@cvrsedqwe thank you for letting me know this. Ill be sure to give them a look when I get the chance. I appreciate you wanting to see my writing get better, that means a lot!
Huh...is everything okay boss?
You there?
Oh, good to know that everything is alright.
Regarding your question, if you're going to do a flashback, now is the best time since Renz has just returned from his failed search for Amo (meaning he'll continue working for Madam, This implies that the story will slow down for now. So it would be good to introduce the exposition before more excitement comes in).
@Gabriel_The_Wall if I may get your input. I've been wanting to do a flashback for a chapter to 2 chapters at most before. but I dont want the flashback to derail the story. (The flashback does have relevance to the story) What do you think?
@Gabriel_The_Wall No worries, I'm okay XD. Life has been very busy as of the last few days but dont worry. I still plan on writing this story as its always on my mind. I even have half the next chapter writing!
Great job so far with your story, my friend. Without a doubt, you're one of the best writers I've found on this site.
@Gabriel_The_Wall thank you so much for the high praise! It makes me so happy you stuck around & continued to support! I hope the conclusion of the story will meet your expectations!
Too funny not to share! @CustodianGuardian ,link is down ↓
Did you delete your Twitter account? Can't find it?
@Gabriel_The_Wall no, for whatever reason, wattpad just won't connect my Twitter account properly.
Hey there, I currently don't have a private Discord & Gmail account & I'm in no real rush to make one. If any of y'all have questions or ideas, just comment under the chapter you're currently reading or under my post. Thanks.
Yo! I'm new here & just had the writing bug & figured this place was a good spot to publish from work.
I welcome constructive criticism, so let me know if I made any grammatical, story inconsistencies or plot holes within the story.
Have fun reading!✌️