CutThroatArtist

@Par_oid Haha yeah, thank you :)

gamesnparodies

Please Continue The book Curiosity strikes. You kinda left us on a cliffhanger. Thank You

DeathlyDreaming

Hi, I lost the password for this account.. I'm so sorry. I cannot continue this. Writing was my passion for a while but my depression got the best of me. I lost all motivation and it hasn't returned.
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CutThroatArtist

@Par_oid <3 <3 <3 <3 Thanks for boosting my confidence...first person but still

Par_oid

I'm glad I helped a little, don't let people bring you down. I'm sorry you have dyslexia, by the way D:
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Par_oid

Besides the rape scene, I think you're story's good. Just a little rushed, but that's okay! I think you're doing well so far, it's definitely better than most Jeff romances I've read. I really like your writing style. (The only thing I recommend is that on your chapters you press the enter key, then the tab. It makes it easier to read). Don't worry Kathleen, just keep writing!