CuteDimpless

Wow! So I found my password written in a book because I couldn’t remember it for the life of me, thanks to myself for being smart and writing it down tho. How is everyone doing ? I doubt my readers are even on this app anymore. Anyway it’s 12:24 am and I have work at 8am, I seem to always do this to myself. Well.... let me try and sleep. Good night to whoever is reading:))

XxdarkparadisexxX

I’m glad you’re alive! Even though your probably don’t remember me. My old acc was xwriteyournamex 
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CuteDimpless

Wow! So I found my password written in a book because I couldn’t remember it for the life of me, thanks to myself for being smart and writing it down tho. How is everyone doing ? I doubt my readers are even on this app anymore. Anyway it’s 12:24 am and I have work at 8am, I seem to always do this to myself. Well.... let me try and sleep. Good night to whoever is reading:))

XxdarkparadisexxX

I’m glad you’re alive! Even though your probably don’t remember me. My old acc was xwriteyournamex 
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siinner

Hey you asked me to read your book and I did and I've found that while there are some spots where you didn't add proper punctuation and that there were some misspellings, it's a really really good book and I can't wait for you to update again, hope it's soon cause it already has me hooked

CuteDimpless

@siinner Thank you. And I hopefully I'll update soon, I'm just trying to get more readers because updating a new chapter . 
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siinner

Of course not. The book is amazing and I can deal with a few typos to be able to read it. It's so great and I am so excited for your next update, whenever that may be.
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CuteDimpless

@siinner Thank you so much, I will have to work on that. I hope that doesn't make you want to read less. :)
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cutealisha599

Yo! You asked me to read your book "Bad Boy. Good lips" on my profile, and after taking a look at it, I have a few suggestions for you! (Note: I'm not saying this to be rude or superior or anything, these are just some things I noticed that can help the book become better. I thought you might appreciate some constructive criticism. 
          First off, it'd be a lot better if you'd use proper punctuation marks where required. The use of proper apostrophe marks and commas will make your writing and narration much smoother.
          Second off, there are some grammatical errors and the use of tenses in some places is a bit off. It'd be better to change it up a bit.
          Hope you have a good day!
          

CuteDimpless

@cutealisha599 Thank you so much for your opinion I will have to work on that. I also make sure to put "unedited" on top of each chapter before writing it because I don't have time to edit. :)
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siinner

Are you ever going to put hickeys back up? Sorry, I just really loved that book.

CuteDimpless

@girlinthelibrary13 I'm sorry bb. But I will be working on other books soon. I've just grew tired of Hickies.
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