
JoesephStretch
Thank you for the great feedback. It has given me an idea of some mistakes that I have made, thanks to that I can go back in and now rework the chapter. So then it may flow better and not recap what characters have said.

CuteFairyDust
@JoesephStretch, I'm so glad I could help! It's a great story so far. Good job!
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