It's really hard finding a well written version of jeff in fanfics.
He's either hyper realistic and pretty much just sees reader as another victim most of the fic, and there's absolutely no romance. Or hes too nice, his insanity way too watered down. Not many authors can balance it well. He's obviously not capable of genuine love, but still clearly feels something for reader. He is an alcoholic, angry, violent person, so when falling in love, he's not gonna be the best partner. It takes time, especially for someone like him to fall in love. More people should get that. Anyway, I really enjoyed your fanfic, and hope to see more Creepy pasta fics on your account. maybe another jeff fanfic. But no pressure of course. Definitely one of the best written versions I've found in a while. Watering him down just enough that's it still quite realistic.