@CuttiexD24 -》 not that it's panget ü I've been an avid fan of wattpad for years and f u want to hear out my advice, well here goes..nkakabawas ng appeal basahin ang story that is written in "jejemon style" hehe ur doing a lot of caps kht d nmn kelangan. madami k ring maling grammar..but u know what, ur story has potential nmn ü kht purong tagalog gamitin m s story m ok lng. kesa nmn masabhan k n trying hard k mag english dba?lam m nmn dami basher/maldita dto s wattpad. nwei, keep up the good work