CyberGuy419

This is a bit late but oh well…
          	
          	My offensive but also slightly funny comedy book, Protocol Tron, is officially complete. Will probably undergo revisions later as I normally do, but it’s been wild and fun writing this. Thanks to all who read it and didn’t die from cringe after chapter one. For those who did perish from the jokes, rest in peace lol. Anyways, I’ll see you all in Maalik’s Path when it gets updated for the 629,716,502nd time.
          	
          	Cheers. 

CyberGuy419

This is a bit late but oh well…
          
          My offensive but also slightly funny comedy book, Protocol Tron, is officially complete. Will probably undergo revisions later as I normally do, but it’s been wild and fun writing this. Thanks to all who read it and didn’t die from cringe after chapter one. For those who did perish from the jokes, rest in peace lol. Anyways, I’ll see you all in Maalik’s Path when it gets updated for the 629,716,502nd time.
          
          Cheers. 

CyberGuy419

Since Dreamland Guilds is on hold until January, I will begin heavy revision on Maalik's Path once again. Most of it will be focused on the early chapters, taking into account every single comment I've received. Major parts of the story will remain the same, other minor scenes may see entirely alternate results. But almost every line will be remastered to take into account of proper POV usage, appropriate grammar, detailed descriptions and a smoother flow in both dialogue and general narration.
          
          Major thanks to all who have commented and gave feedback on my book. I'm excited to begin rewriting.

DomiSotto

@CyberGuy419 oh, you are going to have a fun December!
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CyberGuy419

After receiving a lot of greatly appreciated feedback and criticism, I've completely rewritten the entire prologue to Maalik's Path. Rather than jumping straight into the excitement with a voyage across the Atlantic, I've taken a step back and included a short segment in Renaissance, Italy. 
          
          I've taken a lot of the notes into consideration, and I'm quite pleased with my new efforts. No longer is the intro just packed with loud dialogue and 4th-wall breaks. Hope this is more enjoyable, and thanks again for the comments. Cheers

CyberGuy419

In case anyone is concerned, I have abandoned my ONC. I never even submitted it for the Round 2 qualifications. Unfortunately, I never had the time to continue writing it.
          
          Instead, I'm spending my free time working on the EoT franchise, and Protocol Tron. Have a nice day.

CyberGuy419

So, this has been a bit overdue. I've barely done any work on here, left many of my books, stopped reading for others and overall have gone quiet. What happened? 
          
          Well, I got a job as some of you know and it has drained me physically and mentally. Time has not been on my side. 
          
          Don't know when I'll ever update any of my books, but know that they are NOT abandoned. I'd rather die than leave my books like Evolution of Time or Protocol Tron unfinished. Ever since joining a guilds club, I've gotten extensive feedback on my stories and I have ideas on how to edit and fix them. As for reading other books... I'm trying. Got book assignments in other clubs that I need to read too. I genuinely don't know anymore. But yeah... Thanks for sticking around. Cheers.

CyberGuy419

And yes, I updated my pfp. This one might be permanent
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CyberGuy419

Maalik's Path new chapter woahhh, and this one's the prologue! 
          
          Prologue | Pilot
          
          So now, anyone who wants to read the book can start with the prologue that has a little mini adventure and lots of exciting dialogue and buildup. Or if you're already reading, you can check it out because it might contain a teeny bit of lore. I don't know, it's your choice. Who the hell is even reading this? Lol

CyberGuy419

@David_NL thanks, glad you like it.
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CyberGuy419

Wow, what a shocker. Maalik's Path has received another update. I promised myself I was finished with it after 2+ years of writing it, but I guess not. This is Part I of the new additions being added. 
          
          Chapter XVI | Cairo | Part I
          
          This is part of my plan to completely rewrite the ending to Maalik's Path as I was left dissatisfied. A few more parts are to come, as well as a potential prologue to add to the very beginning oooooooh. I'm also deleting discussion questions and I reorganized the chapter parts/names.
          
          But yeah, that's about it. Thank you to absolutely nobody who has continued reading this book  but if one of you decide to read it, hope you enjoy. It's my finest work to date.  
          
          As for Protocol Tron, it has not been abandoned. I have a MASSIVE new idea that I need to implement as we approach that book's finale. It might be the most chaotic ending to a book I've ever written, and I've written some crazy endings. But yeah, that's about it... cheers.

CyberGuy419

Haven't written as much as I used to. Gonna try to fix that moving forward. Here's two more chapters for Protocol Tron. 
          
          Dim Survival
          Roger Roger
          
          Comedy has reached its lowest point yet. At this rate I should change the book's genre, but the next chapters should bring some comedy back!