Cytolene

Hello, 
          I just started writing a contemporary romance by the name of Redemption, a relatively o.k draft of the first 3 chapters is up at the moment. It is a novel with a trans heroine as one of the main protagonists, not a topic of most adult novels I am afraid and that makes it particularly challenging to write, at least as far as my limited skill is concerned. 
          
          I am taking myself out of my comfort zone with this one a bit. Just wanted to try my hand at something a little different. 
          
          Would really love it if you can give it a read and let me know what you think. I know it is asking a lot but I do respect your opinion and look forward to seeing if you think the book has any potential at all. 
          
          You have been kind enough to give me an honest opinion in the past and I trust you wont hold back this time either.  
          
          BTW where are all your works? I remember you had quite a lot of stuff up.

@Ctyolene Ah. Well, she is madly in love with me, so she does it for free. Lol, she's gonna kill me.

@GhostNinja My publisher provides my editor. I was just wondering what the going rate was. 
          
          It's 2.20am here, I'm off to bed in a couple of minutes.
          

@Ctyolene That you would have to work out with her. She's online now, reading the newest chapter I just posted. Oooh! Would you be willing to critique that one?! I would be forever in your debt!

@GhostNinja How much does she charge?
          

@Ctyolene my editor is basically one of the people who taught me to write. She points out my errors, shows me how to fix one of them if they're recurring, and tells me when she wants the MS back. @hunnybee is her name, and she is awesome.

@GhostNinja What way does your editor work? Mine just points out all my mistakes and gives me a date by which she expects me to have fixed them. 

I have an editor waiting for me to finish my edits, and she will polish it further. Thank you again, it is much appreciated. @Ctyolene 

@GhostNinja It was interesting. But I really don't have time to do indepth editing. You should get a proper structural edit from someone experienced. 

@Ctyolene Then my most humble apologies for having you read my drivel. Have a good day, and if you ever decide you would like to read them, I'm always around.