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@hikarinokishi3 you were actually one of my inspirations to write on this platform, and I'm writing my own story. I've lost my drive, but it'll come back. Again, have a nice life, you deserve it you great human.

@EpicSquad5 It's not a problem. I'm glad you're ok with my choice to let this be. I may start writing again, but it wouldn't be about pokemon romances lol. Nothing wrong with writing that, just not what I do anymore. I wish you a great future and a happy life.

@hikarinokishi3 yeah, I understand, sorry for the first part, I was hopped up on sugar. I'm not big into Wattpad anymore. Have a great life. And I salute you sir.

@hikarinokishi3 No problems! Writing should be about pouring passion into work you love doing! I hope you enjoy all the things you do in your life, and I hope you find joy in your writings!

@Luke_Windsor I'm sorry, Luke. I've moved on
            
            I hope you can let this be. If you want to continue the series, I'm sure you could do a better job writing it than me. It wouldn't have the passion in it that it did when I was 14. 
            
            Again, I apologize for broken promises, but I just can't continue this. Even if I wanted to, I don't remember the password to my old account.

@Luke_Windsor Hell yeah, man.

@FOR_HONOR_IS_AWESOME I apologize my friend, but I won't be continuing the series. I've decided to let it rest. If you don't think this is me, that's fine, but I wanted to apologize and then let this issue rest. Thank you for reading and enjoying the story I wrote. It means more than you know.

@FOR_HONOR_IS_AWESOME 
            a part two will come out sometime, but I'm not sure when

@ttvvttvv Ok I read the first chapter of your story and I have some suggestions. In the first chapter you always try to introduce the main character unless the main character is meant to have amnesia or some sort of hiding factor that would keep the reader from knowing his identity. Second, you need to go into more detail and tell the readers who the enemy is if there is one. third you need to go into detail about the different characters and the way they think and act. and lastly, dialogue is good, but don't add too much

@ttvvttvv Ok. I made a mistake in my first book by making the characters too powerful. You could tell the readers a major weakness that he has so that he isn't too overpowering. Sorry i gtg

Ok cool as it says it is during halo 4 on earth and the main carachters name is tom