Califia

Hey DJ~~Pretty creative premise to "Scylla Sisterhood." I like the rhythm and texture of your word choice as well--nice. It's a pleasure to find a discerning writer of the King's English.
          
          Now go forth and "witch the world with noble horsemanship"--Cervantes
          
          ~~Califia

DJElliott

@Califia   Thanks for the compliments.  ^.^   Still kind of a typical setting for a swords-n-magic fantasy, but all you need to make it into something 'unique' is just a single little twist to the norm.
            
            I'll admit my style is a bit... well, it takes some getting used-to.  The perspectives shift back-and-forth from one character to the next, but I tend to enjoy it, as if you were right there watching the exchanges, then your focus would do that naturally.  At least, that's my excuse.  >.>
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