@SpankyBunz; I'm a reader with certain expectations about what fiction should be like from page one. Novels or novellas and short short stories should proceed as if it was any day of the week and flesh out the surroundings and the people that dwell within them first and then slowly let horror creep in. Your work does that. My own work, like my life, is messy due to jumping into Wattpad before I knew what I was doing here. I am fixing that and my story here before it goes to a proofreader who will be suggesting changes .... no doubt ...... that I shall follow to make my first work of published fiction in a e book be a must have on every electronic device and then repeat that process with a printed version of the e-book.