Canvis

Hello, would you mind just taking a look at my first vampire story? Its just a prologue right now and i could use some honest reviews. http://www.wattpad.com/2028406-dead-but-breathing Feel free to say no. If you do decide to read this, please leave the Review in the comments ^.^ And vote is you liked it.
          
          THank you for your time!
          
          Love: Canvis (Kristen A. B.)