Hey author, hope u r well, i currently finished ur 2 books, and now on 3rd which is twisted normal, pls pls pls i beg u, william's character is abnormal, and he really needs to understand lou, lou is innocent pls he Doesn't deserve any more abnormality, i Don't question ur writing, i love that that's why I'm here, i love to read toxic and dark bl but this story has no plot and whatsoever, pls these needs and turning point so bad, william needs to understand what is love coz clearly he Doesn't love lou and he Don't evn understand it and this is not lou deserve at all, i love him so much pls Don't do this to him i beg u, and lou needs character dev as well, he can't be like this forever, he needs to understand that william is manipulating him all this time and cheating as well and also Don't evn love him, so they need a big plot and turning point which is extreme angsty i suppose, pls think abt ur readers we all need this whoever stick with this story untill now, pls we also deserve this, if u Don't do and keep it this toxic way then it will be so much unsatisfying that i will wish i cut myself instead pls understand, i hope u see thus msg and try to understand what I'm saying and also love u ❤️, i will read the 3rd part after u finish coz I've zero patience and pls update more often if u can coz i noticed ur last 2 updates and It's way too long, if u can pls try. Stay healty ❤️
