Why is it so cheesy?!?! Can I fibd a starco story that isn't cliché?!?! Plssss! One moment they were having troubles about their feelings the next thing...BAM! Their making out!!!
Why is it so cheesy?!?! Can I fibd a starco story that isn't cliché?!?! Plssss! One moment they were having troubles about their feelings the next thing...BAM! Their making out!!!
@thatrandomgirly yey thanks! Oh and btw I really like your book! I don't comment alot mostly if I was just really hung up in a book so sorry if I don't comment much
@thatrandomgirly lol tnxs for reading mbor I'm actually hoping you reading fall of olympus... and maybe some criticizing my book of randomness was just a diary hehe sorry for being so choosy
@DaPinkFluffyUnicorn oh of course you will find something! Oh and please don't stop writing! Maybe in the future I can hear about an author who loves unicorn!!!
@DOP1935
OMG Thank you soooooooo much!!!!!!!!!!!! It's ppl like you who keep me writing!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I will definitely check out your stories!!!!! We'll see if I can find anything to criticize :)
@DaPinkFluffyUnicorn no prob! Great story btw!!! Anyway hope you check out my story and do some criticsm! Its okay to be honest!!! Your story has been one of the greatest mash up I've ever read! I read alot of mash up but only two has actually given me satisfaction!