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DOP1935
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Why is it so cheesy?!?! Can I fibd a starco story that isn't cliché?!?! Plssss! One moment they were having troubles about their feelings the next thing...BAM! Their making out!!!
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DOP1935
Why is it so cheesy?!?! Can I fibd a starco story that isn't cliché?!?! Plssss! One moment they were having troubles about their feelings the next thing...BAM! Their making out!!!
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DOP1935
@Kyungie247 whaaa really?
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DOP1935
@Kyungie247 woah really?
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DOP1935
@Kyungie247 shh! Don't call me keira! And HIIIIIIIIII nag on ka na rn! After 100 yrs
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thatrandomgirly
Heyy, mind checking out some of my stories? I wrote some fanfics and a short story!! Please vote and comment! xoxoxo
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DOP1935
@thatrandomgirly yey thanks! Oh and btw I really like your book! I don't comment alot mostly if I was just really hung up in a book so sorry if I don't comment much
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DOP1935
@thatrandomgirly lol tnxs for reading mbor I'm actually hoping you reading fall of olympus... and maybe some criticizing my book of randomness was just a diary hehe sorry for being so choosy
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DaPinkFluffyUnicorn
Thanks for following
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DOP1935
@DaPinkFluffyUnicorn oh of course you will find something! Oh and please don't stop writing! Maybe in the future I can hear about an author who loves unicorn!!!
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DaPinkFluffyUnicorn
@DOP1935 OMG Thank you soooooooo much!!!!!!!!!!!! It's ppl like you who keep me writing!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I will definitely check out your stories!!!!! We'll see if I can find anything to criticize :)
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DOP1935
@DaPinkFluffyUnicorn no prob! Great story btw!!! Anyway hope you check out my story and do some criticsm! Its okay to be honest!!! Your story has been one of the greatest mash up I've ever read! I read alot of mash up but only two has actually given me satisfaction!
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221B_or_not_221B
Hi! Would you mind checking out my fic The Power In Words? I'm just looking for some constructive criticism :)
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valcury
Thanks for the follow!!! Can I ask you why, though? I'm just curious.
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DOP1935
@Cinnamon_Hallows Sorry late reply but HIIII