DSWhisPerinGPeN

What do u think about my works? how can i improve? .. give a feedback
          	 I'll read rest of the chapters of your book after my exams...

DSWhisPerinGPeN

thanks for the feedback...i'll consider ur opinion. thank u for reading and supporting.. :)
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MagicalEtherealVibes

@DSWhisPerinGPeN I can say your work is vivid and creates strong emotions. As someone who has gone through the heavy emotions you write about I think you're doing such a good job it makes ppl like me relive moments. If you could...lighten some moments it will make it easier (emotionally) to read. Not that you have to! The fact you stir such emotions in me is proof your writing is evocative.
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DSWhisPerinGPeN

What do u think about my works? how can i improve? .. give a feedback
           I'll read rest of the chapters of your book after my exams...

DSWhisPerinGPeN

thanks for the feedback...i'll consider ur opinion. thank u for reading and supporting.. :)
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MagicalEtherealVibes

@DSWhisPerinGPeN I can say your work is vivid and creates strong emotions. As someone who has gone through the heavy emotions you write about I think you're doing such a good job it makes ppl like me relive moments. If you could...lighten some moments it will make it easier (emotionally) to read. Not that you have to! The fact you stir such emotions in me is proof your writing is evocative.
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authorgbchristelle

I am still reading reborn but I will still vote for your other works

authorgbchristelle

@DSWhisPerinGPeN good luck on your exam
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DSWhisPerinGPeN

@GBCHISTELLE thanks, now i'm having an exam so i maybe busy for 2 weeks.
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DSWhisPerinGPeN

wow… 1K reads  {The Life Reborn}
          
          i don’t even know where to start. i just want to say thank you—really, thank you—to every single one of you who’s been reading this story. whether you started from the beginning or just found it today, i’m so grateful you gave it your time..
          
          thank you for reading. 
          your support means more than you know.
          
          we’re only just getting started 
          Thank u again. keep reading
          - DSWhisPerinGPeN