DSWhisPerinGPeN

Wht do u think about  the new cover of The life reborn

DSWhisPerinGPeN

 THE DESTINY
          
          By DS
          
          At the edge of silence stands a castle that does not appear on maps.
          
          By day, it looks abandoned.
          By night, it changes.
          
          The clock strikes twelve.
          Footsteps echo in empty halls.
          A whisper crawls through the dark—
          
          “It’s your destiny.”
          
          Some doors open on their own.
          Some never let you leave.
          
          And once the castle chooses you…
          
          It never forgets.
           Thanks for all ur support in The life Reborn . because of some personal issues i was not active ,first of all sorry for that. i am expecting the same support from u guys for this stry...

forraver

Hi, i'm sorry to promote here, but i'm a newbie writer and will you guys support me?
          
          It's a short story about psikology doctor that get suck into fantasy world. But with a plot twist at the end.
          
          It's only one chapter and already finnish. Thank youuuuu. I would be gratefull if a person enjoy my story
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/405663528?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=forraver

forraver

@forraver thanks for the tipss
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DSWhisPerinGPeN

@forraver but, ur character name and the plot look quiet familiar to me. I think u got wht i meant.  Try to write stories which include more chapters. keep going..
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DSWhisPerinGPeN

@forraver its ok
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DSWhisPerinGPeN

What do u think about my works? how can i improve? .. give a feedback
           I'll read rest of the chapters of your book after my exams...

DSWhisPerinGPeN

thanks for the feedback...i'll consider ur opinion. thank u for reading and supporting.. :)
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MagicalEtherealVibes

@DSWhisPerinGPeN I can say your work is vivid and creates strong emotions. As someone who has gone through the heavy emotions you write about I think you're doing such a good job it makes ppl like me relive moments. If you could...lighten some moments it will make it easier (emotionally) to read. Not that you have to! The fact you stir such emotions in me is proof your writing is evocative.
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DSWhisPerinGPeN

wow… 1K reads  {The Life Reborn}
          
          i don’t even know where to start. i just want to say thank you—really, thank you—to every single one of you who’s been reading this story. whether you started from the beginning or just found it today, i’m so grateful you gave it your time..
          
          thank you for reading. 
          your support means more than you know.
          
          we’re only just getting started 
          Thank u again. keep reading
          - DSWhisPerinGPeN