DSWhisPerinGPeN

What do u think about my work-The life Reborn? Should i continue it...? Let me know ur opinion.

forraver

Hi, i'm sorry to promote here, but i'm a newbie writer and will you guys support me?
          
          It's a short story about psikology doctor that get suck into fantasy world. But with a plot twist at the end.
          
          It's only one chapter and already finnish. Thank youuuuu. I would be gratefull if a person enjoy my story
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/405663528?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=forraver

DSWhisPerinGPeN

@forraver but, ur character name and the plot look quiet familiar to me. I think u got wht i meant.  Try to write stories which include more chapters. keep going..
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DSWhisPerinGPeN

What do u think about my works? how can i improve? .. give a feedback
           I'll read rest of the chapters of your book after my exams...

DSWhisPerinGPeN

thanks for the feedback...i'll consider ur opinion. thank u for reading and supporting.. :)
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MagicalEtherealVibes

@DSWhisPerinGPeN I can say your work is vivid and creates strong emotions. As someone who has gone through the heavy emotions you write about I think you're doing such a good job it makes ppl like me relive moments. If you could...lighten some moments it will make it easier (emotionally) to read. Not that you have to! The fact you stir such emotions in me is proof your writing is evocative.
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authorgbchristelle

I am still reading reborn but I will still vote for your other works

DSWhisPerinGPeN

@GBCHISTELLE thanks, now i'm having an exam so i maybe busy for 2 weeks.
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authorgbchristelle

Thanks for voting 

DSWhisPerinGPeN

wow… 1K reads  {The Life Reborn}
          
          i don’t even know where to start. i just want to say thank you—really, thank you—to every single one of you who’s been reading this story. whether you started from the beginning or just found it today, i’m so grateful you gave it your time..
          
          thank you for reading. 
          your support means more than you know.
          
          we’re only just getting started 
          Thank u again. keep reading
          - DSWhisPerinGPeN