DSWhisPerinGPeN
What do u think about my work-The life Reborn? Should i continue it...? Let me know ur opinion.
DSWhisPerinGPeN
forraver
Hi, i'm sorry to promote here, but i'm a newbie writer and will you guys support me?
It's a short story about psikology doctor that get suck into fantasy world. But with a plot twist at the end.
It's only one chapter and already finnish. Thank youuuuu. I would be gratefull if a person enjoy my story
https://www.wattpad.com/story/405663528?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=forraver
DSWhisPerinGPeN
@forraver but, ur character name and the plot look quiet familiar to me. I think u got wht i meant. Try to write stories which include more chapters. keep going..
DSWhisPerinGPeN
What do u think about my works? how can i improve? .. give a feedback
I'll read rest of the chapters of your book after my exams...
DSWhisPerinGPeN
thanks for the feedback...i'll consider ur opinion. thank u for reading and supporting.. :)
MagicalEtherealVibes
@DSWhisPerinGPeN I can say your work is vivid and creates strong emotions. As someone who has gone through the heavy emotions you write about I think you're doing such a good job it makes ppl like me relive moments. If you could...lighten some moments it will make it easier (emotionally) to read. Not that you have to! The fact you stir such emotions in me is proof your writing is evocative.
authorgbchristelle
I am still reading reborn but I will still vote for your other works
authorgbchristelle
Thanks for voting
DSWhisPerinGPeN
Poem- new work
1. Just Me ~DS
soft echoes of the storms I carry inside.
They are the quiet breaths between my words,
the secret songs no one else can hear.
check it out
RoxasWings
DSWhisPerinGPeN
wow… 1K reads {The Life Reborn}
i don’t even know where to start. i just want to say thank you—really, thank you—to every single one of you who’s been reading this story. whether you started from the beginning or just found it today, i’m so grateful you gave it your time..
thank you for reading.
your support means more than you know.
we’re only just getting started
Thank u again. keep reading
- DSWhisPerinGPeN
DSWhisPerinGPeN
chapter 17 of The Life Reborn is out. check it out
DSWhisPerinGPeN
changed the cover page of The Life Reborn what do u think? is it good?