Da3rdGreatKing

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Thanks for reading coin rush episode 4, this episode I had kind of fun making it, it was a bit disjointed plans, but I got it hang, thanks for the best premier 50 readers in 2 hours, and now it's on 85 reads! Here's a deleted scene
          	
          	Cheesy: Gordon Ramsey, how Is the turkey?
          	
          	G.Ramsey: I never said cook turkey! Are you drafty or dumb?
          	
          	Mr Corn Flakes Boy: Sir, I am the most gayest person in town! *dances madly*
          	
          	Gordon Ramsey: Should I take you in the locking room?
          	
          	Cheesy: No, No, I'll cook the chicken!
          	
          	Mr Corn Flakes Boy: I'm gay!
          	
          	*jumps from a kitchen table to the floor and hurts his crotch*
          	
          	Mr Corn Flakes Boy: OH CRAP MY PENIS! OWWW!
          	
          	Gordon Ramsey: *facepalms*
          	
          	I removed this scene because I thought it walled take time, some cutaway were also removed like this...
          	
          	Gordon Ramsey: It smells like un cleaned pit latrine!
          	
          	
          	*cutaway shows a dirty pit latrine with flies*
          	
          	Fly 1: Should we suck the dirt?
          	
          	Fly 2: Yeah sure, why not?
          	
          	*cutaway ends*
          	
          	It was disgusting, anyway those were the two deleted scenes, enjoy episode 4 and read it! And like it!

Da3rdGreatKing

this message may be offensive
Thanks for reading coin rush episode 4, this episode I had kind of fun making it, it was a bit disjointed plans, but I got it hang, thanks for the best premier 50 readers in 2 hours, and now it's on 85 reads! Here's a deleted scene
          
          Cheesy: Gordon Ramsey, how Is the turkey?
          
          G.Ramsey: I never said cook turkey! Are you drafty or dumb?
          
          Mr Corn Flakes Boy: Sir, I am the most gayest person in town! *dances madly*
          
          Gordon Ramsey: Should I take you in the locking room?
          
          Cheesy: No, No, I'll cook the chicken!
          
          Mr Corn Flakes Boy: I'm gay!
          
          *jumps from a kitchen table to the floor and hurts his crotch*
          
          Mr Corn Flakes Boy: OH CRAP MY PENIS! OWWW!
          
          Gordon Ramsey: *facepalms*
          
          I removed this scene because I thought it walled take time, some cutaway were also removed like this...
          
          Gordon Ramsey: It smells like un cleaned pit latrine!
          
          
          *cutaway shows a dirty pit latrine with flies*
          
          Fly 1: Should we suck the dirt?
          
          Fly 2: Yeah sure, why not?
          
          *cutaway ends*
          
          It was disgusting, anyway those were the two deleted scenes, enjoy episode 4 and read it! And like it!

Da3rdGreatKing

Episode 3 was fun to write, especially the love triangle, now time to write episode 4, coming next week on wattpad!
          
          And thanks for 332 readers total on my books, what else would you like to see in Coin Rush?

Da3rdGreatKing

I'll say first, In Season 2, the first episode may be the gang going to Venice..  if it's possible
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