FancyFlux

Yo, cheers for following along with my book so far. It's my first time writing so I'm looking for a little bit of feedback. What's the thoughts so far?

Dabi65672

@FancyFlux For sure , the thing I liked is how ahri got interested with the Y/N and instead of shutting down on plan to meet up with his old college frnds.
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FancyFlux

Sweet, thanks! If you've got any nitpicks about anything in the future, def drop a comment so i can have a look and rearrange if needed.
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Dabi65672

@FancyFlux So far I like the story like character build up and all. Your story is amazing btw
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pokewriters01

Hello Ma’am/Sir!!
          Sorry for dropping here, you can ignore this message or delete it from your Message Board. But, if you are finding for a very unique and new plot. Then you can make your way towards our book. I am damn sure you will enjoy it!! Will drop a link down if you wish to read it. 
          Thanks for your time!!
          Wish you luck for future!!
          Take care!! Bye!! Hope to meet you soon!! :)
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/282071078-the-struggling-destiny

BondxFanFiction

you are my saviour Dabi if you would not have followed me and put my book in your reading list I would have ended my writing career in watpad(that was my first story so I would not call it a career but who cares

Dabi65672

@BondxFanFiction I m 12th final year or last year of high school.
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BondxFanFiction

damn sad good luck it's my summer vacation u in which class now?
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Dabi65672

@BondxFanFiction I will read them later on bcz having final exams and it sucks.
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