FancyFlux
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Yo, cheers for following along with my book so far. It's my first time writing so I'm looking for a little bit of feedback. What's the thoughts so far?
Dabi65672
@FancyFlux For sure , the thing I liked is how ahri got interested with the Y/N and instead of shutting down on plan to meet up with his old college frnds.
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FancyFlux
Sweet, thanks! If you've got any nitpicks about anything in the future, def drop a comment so i can have a look and rearrange if needed.
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Dabi65672
@FancyFlux So far I like the story like character build up and all. Your story is amazing btw
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