DaddyRainbow

Sorry chapters 1 and 2 were so short, but chapter 3 is longer, so hopefully that should make up for it

DaddyRainbow

@NatashaPrice7512  thank you for inspiring me to start writing my own book. If you could leave some tips for me that would be great. The ending to Two was SO sad.

DaddyRainbow

Thank you, i actually got the inspiration to rewrite The Elementals after re-reading Five.
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Averys_Blade

@minergav  no, thank you for reading it!! I know, I know, it was a really sad scene I made my friend cry and got a little teary writing it. It was necessary, though.
            Honestly, the best advice I could give is to just keep practising and read a lot, it really extends your vocabulary, and honestly the more practise you have the better you're going to get. I've been writing whole books since I was eleven and short stories before that and that helped me improve greatly to where I am today. I know you've probably heard that bit if advice a dozen times, but it's the best I can give. Also, having a good idea of exactly what's going to happen in your book before you start is key, too, it's obvious when you're making it up as you're going along. I hope this helped :)
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Averys_Blade

Thanks for reading / commenting on my books, unfortunately my wattpads been playing up so I cant reply to each comrnt, but River is a boy, from my close friend (IncognitoCookie)'s books, which I would recommend if you haven't already read :)