Well, welcome everyone! Here we are at the end of my book, now that it's finished it's ready to be read cover to cover. I'm open to any criticism you might have, if there is something I can improve then I most certainly will. I know the book is there in full, but I know there's some details I'm going to add to flesh the book out more. Which is understandable. I didn't write this in one go, I say it took me about six months to write, and I include this summer where I pretty much took a break from writing and didn't write for like two months. Now that the story is complete, and I have the time-line down there's some details that I'm going to make more clear.
For example at the start of my book in Origin Story I said Nora was adopted at first. I decided to make her mother someone Nate encounters in the book. So I changed adopted to found by Alice and went with it. It won't be anything major, it'll just make the book fit better.
Anyways if anything comes up, let me know and I'll get to it. Also just heads up if you can't tell just from reading this my punctuation sucks, so any help with that is greatly appreciated.
Thanks everyone, I hope you enjoy my book.