Hi,
I came across your story here on Wattpad and your writing really caught my attention! I’m Camila, a beta reader who helps authors strengthen their stories with detailed, reader-focused feedback on pacing, character development, and overall flow.
I offer paid beta reading, but I usually read the first chapter for free so authors can get a feel for my feedback style before deciding if they’d like to move forward. If you’re open to it, I’d love to check out a chapter and share my notes.
Either way, keep up the great work — your story definitely has potential!