rubaurfruby

@Dailey-UNFILTERED ohh thankyou for your opinion it really matters ....Guys, I’m going to take a temporary pause from this novel, as I think we need some time for more readers to join us. Right now, I have very few reads and votes. So, please let me know if you are genuinely interested in the continuation of this novel — only then will I move forward with it.
          
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Dailey-UNFILTERED

@rubaurfruby I really love the care you put into your story, but to make Irha feel like a fully breathing, complex character, I’d suggest keeping the narrative grounded in one consistent setting with rich day-to-day background details, letting her bond with Arohi build naturally, having Irha take time to focus on her own growth, and changing Sarim to a fellow student—perhaps one navigating high family expectations and an arranged marriage to a wealthy family—so their connection feels genuine, equal, and deeply compelling for readers.
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rubaurfruby

@Dailey-UNFILTERED  thankyou for voting it really matters , I want to ask u a few things about my novel as I want genuine review ... so do u actually like the story ? , where I lack as a author ? , as a reader what things u like about my novel and what things u don't like ?    also do u like cover page , title and characters plz give your  precious time , I will be honored thanks a lot                                                                                                              and please follow my instagram page ,,,name: boundbydecree
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