Daisy-is-Lazy

How's this for a prompt?
          	
          	Eight teens, all strangers, armed with the powers of the elements, are destined to come together, and save the earth from an ancient evil. They will have to train and master their abilities, all the while fleeing from the government in hopes of not being captured and experimented on. As well as dealing with their own personal issues, such as acceptance, trust, and saying goodbye to their old life.
          	
          	That was something that I've been contemplating on writing for awhile, but I felt like it could use some criticism. So feel free to say what you think about this idea!
          	
          	

Daisy-is-Lazy

How's this for a prompt?
          
          Eight teens, all strangers, armed with the powers of the elements, are destined to come together, and save the earth from an ancient evil. They will have to train and master their abilities, all the while fleeing from the government in hopes of not being captured and experimented on. As well as dealing with their own personal issues, such as acceptance, trust, and saying goodbye to their old life.
          
          That was something that I've been contemplating on writing for awhile, but I felt like it could use some criticism. So feel free to say what you think about this idea!