Hi DaisyMay767,
I hope that I didn't come across rudely in some of my comments. When writing something purely in text, it can sometimes come across as being mean in tone, and that wasn't my intention.
I wrote some more comments to faithcole about my thoughts overall on the book. In the end, in my comments, I'm encouraging authors to take their ideas and work at them, making them even better.
Rest assured, if a book is actually bad, I usually bite my tongue and try to be vaguely supportive. I've been asked by personal friends to read some completely unreadable stuff before.
Faithcole's story is rather good, and I hope she keeps working at it.
In the end, I guess I've been spoiled writing wise because all I've been reading lately is The Stormlight Archive.
#AllHailBrandonSanderson
Anyway, I hope you understand, and have a great day.
Sail the stars my friend,
Curtis C, the Awesome Astronaut
