Reena Bansal

Hey!!
          
          Wanted to ask something
          
          Is there something I should improve or some suggestion
          
          I have been a bit perplexed not on my storyline but if I'm able to convey the emotions properly through my words or not? 
          
          Would love to know your take on it
          
          Do reply if you are free...

Please update it ..it's very interesting book