love_desiie

HI queen ! if you could take the time out of your day and check out my new book I would greatly appreciate it.
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/52410288?utm_source=ios&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_reading&wp_page=library&wp_uname=love_desiie&wp_originator=sbHIZbkRT%2BlyRXi3ha3GzwM6ChFfAqUy6bB2Y6I1RiJoU7DoCpiK4z3%2FozAVZmLSdE60G9je%2BCGJ5JNM1yyLCh5TrvPo1xZsG9vQATo8qa3xE2varHzwb7nJFfJk3d%2BZ
          
          Trust Issues
          **sorry guys I'm not the best when it comes to doing these but read the book I'll try my best to make sure you love it" After being nearly beaten to death by her dad or as she refers to him her "sperm donor", 15 year old Zayona thinks she has lost all happiness. Her mom marries a rich investor ,she and he little sister, Rayna finally gets brothers and she has her best friends by her side. This wa...
          
          Trust Issues
          **sorry guys I'm not the best when it comes to doing these but read the book I'll try my best to make sure you love it" After being nearly beaten to death by her dad or as she refers to him her "sperm donor", 15 year old Zayona thinks she has lost all happiness. Her mom marries a rich investor ,she and he little sister, Rayna finally gets brothers and she has her best friends by her side. This wa...

DajaCarroway

Did y'all kept rewind on the part where Chris was talking because I did lol the face experience he makes always be sexy and beautiful without even trying 

Books_by_TF

@DajaCarroway idk if I'm the best person for that but I'd say don't try to throw everything in the book all at once. Build up the scenes so when the big scene happens they expect it but they don't expect it at the same time (if that makes sense) but don't do it to the point that you loose sight of the storyline. Also introduce the characters but in a subtle way not like telling people from the get go their name and height or whatever lol. That's basically all I have until I read it.
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DajaCarroway

https://my.w.tt/OAA9uTG6fbb
          
          @sariahearst 
          
          She is the best and not feeling good rn so everyone wish her good luck in the I'm.

DajaCarroway

Lol I forgot to put DM and you welcome 
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sariahearst

thank yu so much :) !
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