Dajah1216

Anyone want to talk? Like anything from bands, books, music, food, etc. I'd really like to make friends on here ❤️

jtfprods

Hi Dajah, would you take your time to check put my poetry book, " Adam and Eve " and leave it there some feedbacks?? Thankss

Dajah1216

@jtfprods yeah I did, I get your concept now. It's really good and I like the play on Adam and Eve to the relation of the poems.
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jtfprods

@jtfprods hi dajahhh mind to check out the latest update of my book ? :')
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Dajah1216

@jtfprods yes, I did read it. I think you have a very nice idea going with it. The form of writing is clear and understandable, it's also interesting. The sort of cliffhanger at the end is confusing but otherwise it's quite good of a story.
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