@ AliceNACT, you're welcome and thanks for reading and commenting on my story's.
well the story is coming around nicely. I have already written it, I'm just rewriting the stuff that I don't like or is not good enough. This story is my mix of Lord of the Rings, the Dark Materials trilogy and a bit of me of course, so it'll be cool. I think if you like Choak, you'll like this too.
By they way, how is progress on your stories?