@Dam_potterhead I have finish to translate Betrayal and Redemption, now the question is, can I translate the sequel? I will give you all the credit, as I have done with Betrayal and Redemption.
Great chapter can you explain later in the book the battles he had when he was in Tartarus and scars he has. Question is he really going back to camp Jupiter he was prison for 500 years I think he has trust issues.
Hey seriously no hate but your story was cool then it got me really confused in the end of the first book and the start of the second. Percy forgive his former friend Annabeth because of Piper then they hang out and everything. So they were cool before he left as they were friends. Then when Percy goes back to Olympus you make his dad good then bad in a couple chapters. And also what happened to the people that Percy brought back to live you mention them and then stop. But in the end u got yourself a follower
@EvillordPotter88 yeah sorry about that i didnt do a very good job explaining it but Percy never really forgave Annabeth but he knew it would make piper happy so he tried to be friendly and i always thought of jason as jealous of percy and arrogant like his father. sorry if i confused you