@DamnPsycho0507
Hahahaha. So, ayon. Naipublish ko na ang prolouge ng Not Allowed. Bakit 11? Second Generation na kasi 'yon ng Delta Series. Btw, iibahin ko masyado ang When I Saw You. Medyo naguguluhan ako. Might delete it and do some changes. So, later ipopost ko na rin ang new prolouge ng When I Saw You. I hope you'll still support me! Thanks.
1st advice - kahit sinong character but mostly reader insert, OC insert or xreader, WALANG TANGA NA GAGAWA NG MARY SUES! Si Mary Sues ay perpekto, malaki ang hinaharap, curvy at maraming naghahabol na lalaki, maraming kaibigan, sikat at katulad nya din, pretty face, no flaws, big bo0bs, curvy body, perfect.
2nd advice - avoid making a childish woman, yung kaunting maling kilos lang, iiyak or magagalit na, okay naman na moody pero tAngiNa, wag naman all the time ganun reaction mo, di moody yun, immature tawag dun. Especially kapag kasama nya yung love canon nya.
3rd advice - choose between normal or professional descriptive story. Wag yung "over descriptive" na nagiging "orbs" ang "mata", yung sobrang creative na hindi na maganda. Remember you are writing a story, hindi palaliman ng description at understanding sa mga stuffs.
4th advice - kung may character na magsasalita, move ka na ng new paragraph, kung dalawang beses magsasalita ang parehas na character, edi dapat nasa parehas na paragraph, pero hindi dapat sobrang haba yung sinasabi or like 4 na dialogues ang nasa isang paragraph is mali kahit iisang character lang yung nagsasalita. Kung new character naman ang magsasalita, new paragraph, dapat each paragraph kung sakaling ineexplain mo yung ginagawa or tone nya kada salita, be sure na hanggang 3 dialogues lang ang dapat na nasa iisang paragraph.
5th advice - avoid making long stories, gawa ka ng word count, dapat lahat 1500 words kung 1500 words yung una, dapat ganun din yung the rest, kahit di sakto or medyo sorbra sa first word count mo sa first story.
Yan muna mga advice ko.
May Chapter 2 na! Bukas na lang 'yong Chapter 3! HAHAHAHA
Yow dude, take my advice kanina ahahaha. GL!
Chapter 1 of "When I Saw You" Done!
