Dan Garrett

Hey I’m writing my first BxB story and I want tips

Hey so I kinda started writing and I would love your support votes comments and critiques would be appreciated ❤️ 
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/390211873?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_reading&wp_page=library&wp_uname=lonleyloner2007
          
          
          If you are up for a vote for vote I would be up for it 

Read it all! we are true friends we ride together, we die together send this to everybody you care about, including me (if you want) see how many times you get it!
          i want you to know you're an amazing friend always and forever!
          if i don't get this back, i understand but i have a challenge for you! once you read this letter you must send it to 15 people (if you want) including me! (if you want) if you get any back, YOU ARE LOVED!!!<3
          tonight at 12 pm the person you love will realize they love you
          at 1-2 pm, be ready for the shock of your life if you break this chain, you will have bad luck tomorrow, someone will ask for your number send this to 15 people or bad luck starts for the whole year!

Happy New Year Dan! Wishes for a great year! ❤️❤️

Ryan and Jake want to wish everyone a wonderful New Year! X

Hi there. 
          
          I'm new to Wattpad and writing. Tips and constructive criticism of my stories is highly appreciated. I hope we can be friends. 
          

Well, amazingly we did it! A chapter a day and 'Racing The Tide' is finished. That was terrific fun! Thank you all for your many kind comments, and helpful suggestions for improvements as we went along. Ryan and Jake are going to have a well-deserved break over Christmas and I hope you all enjoy the rest of the festive season, too. x

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          Please support my fiction, Werewolf Assistant. 
          Read, vote, and comment. 
          Thanks. 

Hello again @DanGarrettAuthor,
          
          Thank you very much for adding The Symphony in the Dark to your list! It is a tremendous honor! We hope that you enjoy and please leave feedback if you can. We seek to improve our craft.
          
          - A Fellow voyager 

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