Dan

Hey guys, I've just posted part 2 of my prologue, let me know what you think and any constructive criticism is welcome! I hope you enjoy it and the sci-fi side of things will become apparent soon I promise!

I have a second part of the prologue to come yet, I've been working on it today and it's almost done. Should be up by Thursday/Friday hopefully!

Finally got a Prologue out for my first idea...Hopefully I'll have enough time to get a new chapter out every week but I'll see how it goes! Any feedback is welcome!