I know it has been a while sense you did 'what is wrong with me', but is there any chance that you were planning on fleshing it out a bit? I am dyslexic and the lack of space between one sentence and the next, as well as the lack of paragraphs, make it hard for me to read.
I like it, but it took me three hours just to read the first chapter. I do not know if you know what dyslexia is, but it makes reading difficult and there is no way for me to separate it myself.
If you are willing to do that or were planning on it anyway that would be great. If not, I will learn to suck it up. Thank you for reading my long message of woe.
