DanaeCollins

@CarlinPhilip oh I did, saw it coming :P but just make Tristan's new "fling" look like a pushover.

@CarlinPhilip of course! I'm really enjoying it. Well written, some plot holes like you never explain why tristen stays with holly even though she can see inside his head. Is there something that she gains? Is she with him because his father is jack?

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Thanks for the vote. Hope you enjoyed 

is there a way i can see who has voted on my story or who has read it??