DaneStanton

So not only am I starting on a new book I am also revising another book completely. The Hooded Man that is. Reason: I have decided that me writing in third person doesn't really suit me as per say writing in first person is so with that being said; I am planning on rewriting the whole of what I've published so far into first person. I also won't be publishing it bit by bit anymore cause I found that to be a rather not-so-great strategy to publishing. Instead with these two books I will publish them when they are finished in in it's entirety so you have a full thing to read instead bit by bit.

CristianHousworth

I have some suggestions for any of your future works, if you'd like to hear it.

CristianHousworth

@CristianHousworth happy to help out
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DaneStanton

@CristianHousworth Yeah I do get what you mean. I'm still working on my next work "The Hooded Man" in which I had to make some major revisions a la making it in a whole nother perspective. After I'm finished with it I will go back and make some revisions. I do appreciate your advice. :)
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CristianHousworth

@CristianHousworth Sorry forgot about this. When you are working up to some kind of action or climax in the chapter or story you are too direct. What I mean by this is, as an example, you shouldn't just straight up have the characters such as in "The Wanderer" just have Amy straight up say she loves him too. You should have her say something far more subtle and passionate. This kind of subtlety makes the narrative much more believable and realistic. Again sorry I left you hanging for a couple days.
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DaneStanton

So not only am I starting on a new book I am also revising another book completely. The Hooded Man that is. Reason: I have decided that me writing in third person doesn't really suit me as per say writing in first person is so with that being said; I am planning on rewriting the whole of what I've published so far into first person. I also won't be publishing it bit by bit anymore cause I found that to be a rather not-so-great strategy to publishing. Instead with these two books I will publish them when they are finished in in it's entirety so you have a full thing to read instead bit by bit.

DaneStanton

Fellow followers! I am writing a new book! I need your guys' support on this one, it has no correlation to The Wanderer, it is a completely different story, it takes place in modern time New York, it is about a killer that had killed David's parents and he has to solve this case, find out who this "Hooded Man" is....I highly encourage you to read every part (If you can) as I publish them, the prologue has just been published, go ahead and read away!!

DaneStanton

Loyal Followers! I have an announcement
          
          As some of you may know I have just recently finished the Wanderer by adding the Epilogue to it and have done some revision to the early chapters due to major plot holes, If you wish to read the Wanderer I recommend going back and starting from the beginning, other than that
          
          Good day...

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Hello @DaneStanton (:, It has been a long time since I posted a 'thankyou to mbs (Message Boards) because I was really busy so now.. I'm gonna do it. Hahah, Thankyou so so much for following me xxx. I really appreciate it and it really means a lot to me. Even though I've said this many times already.. It's still full of sincerity and I mean it. Pm me when you feel doing so or if you have time  ~Biianccs·· «3