Are you really gonna react to all the episodes and movies? Cause let me tell ya, not to discourage you or anything but you do realize there is around 1.2k of episodes, and you want to react to all of it? Plus not including the movies again? I mean I understand you want to do a reaction story, but maybe not the whole episode, plus are you even sure you can do all of it and not stop midway? Cause I've seen a lot of reactions fic and they never even finished them and abandoned them.So my suggestion is that maybe choose some episode like where ash bonds with his pokemon, saves his pokemon, meeting legendaries, first meeting and etc etc. I understand that you want to create your own version of ASMITH33 reaction story, but his story starts with the masters 8 as to shows how far Ash growth is. Plus on his summary he did mention that the reaction was to show the world who and how special Ash is. So that means choosing certain episodes that shows the true characters of Ash, not all of the episode. Plus you could have a bit more of the people reactions and commenting, as yours are a bit lacking in that area as you invited a lot of the people but they are not commenting and reacting , especially those like the champions, elite four,gym leaders,which destroy the purpose of the story as it is mean to shows ALL the people you invite reacting, not certain characters only. They need to react and discuss on the what were shown on the screen, not just sit and be the background silhouette. I advise you to check again his work and see how he does his reaction, where everyone is included in the reaction as much as they or the arthur could. Cause if you just gonna copy paste the episodes and not having a lot of the reaction, people might as well just watch the episodes than reading the story. Like I said previously, this is not to discourage you, but I'm trying to help you as you could do better than this. Just consider on what I wrote.
