Daniel Mountney

Hi All!
          
          I'm looking for an endorsement of my soon-to-be-self-published novel Fall of the Firstborn, to feature on the back cover. I thought I'd message you all to ask if anyone is interested in providing it. I would be happy to pay for the service. A read of the opening chapters would suffice, if time is limited. It would be a great help!
          
          Thanks and I look forward to hearing from you!
          
          Daniel

Hi All,
          
          I hope you're well.
          
          I'd like to ask some advice from you all. It's about the title of my novel Fall of the Firstborn. I'm self publishing soon, but have a slight concern about it. 
          
          The blurb relates that they live in a paradise but that paradise is destroyed by a curse, and they must fight to save their world. But I'm somewhat concerned that Fall of the Firstborn is too negative (and tells a little too much).
          
          Any thoughts and advice would be massively appreciated. You can read the blurb here https://www.wattpad.com/story/143631051-fall-of-the-firstborn
          
          Thanks peeps
          
          Daniel

An account of the Ainulindalë in verse, of the Music of the Ainur, Melkor’s rebellion against Eru Illuvatar, and the forging of Middle-Earth. This material is based and taken from The Silmarillion by JRR Tolkien. https://www.wattpad.com/story/147941988

Thanks for the follow! And thanks for checking out The Fëanoriel Chronicles :)

Hi, what days do you publish?

The Firstborn kindred must race to unmask shadowy enemies and unravel the mysteries of the ancient Curse before they and their world are destroyed. But the Curse is not what they think, lurking far closer than anyone imagines... https://www.wattpad.com/story/143631051

The Firstborn kindred must race to unmask shadowy enemies and unravel the mysteries of the ancient Curse before they and their world are destroyed. But the Curse is not what they think, lurking far closer than anyone imagines... https://www.wattpad.com/story/143631051