Daninja

HELLO FOLLOWERS,
          Anyway know that I hopefully have the attention of the 10 of you, I would like to know if anyone would be interested in seeing either Scorpion's Retribution or Don't piss off Death pick up again with new and improved grammar (maybe no promises) 

@Daninja 
          haha and i never expected you to reply to my message xD
          
          oh well ... this reply might be a bit late but who cares ^^
          
          by the way ... did i ever say THANK YOU FOR FOLLOWING ME! ?
          
          if not then i just did ;)

Chapter 3 of scorpions Retribution is up

For anyone who wants to know I have just posted a new fan fiction for Mortal Kombat titled Scorpion Retribution. Check it out if you like the character Scorpion (I know that's kinda obvious :P)

Fans and fannettes who would like the book "Don't Piss Off Death" to continue I you would like for it to be continue please go to the last chapter of the story and comment 

Thank you! Thank you! Thank you for fanning back! Did i mention thank you? Thanks! Here have a cookie with milk *gives cookie and a glass of milk* xD ~Aria

Hello wonderful, followers now I'm aware most don't tend to be able to read my books so I have written a new and improved book that you guy will get the third revised copy of. The second revised copy will be posted on Fanfiction so if you want faster updates and short chapters go their of you want longer chapters and you will have longer updates. 
          

I'm considering writing another book that I will finish this time because I have forgotten the storyline I had for DPOD so I can't continue 

@LadyOfTheNight hmm wasn't expecting a comment on my story i kinda stopped writing it 

ahhh damn it ... wattpad has some kind of problem so i ca't comment on your story ... but i started reading it and... well it's kinda difficult ... the idea behind your story is really awesome, but (yeah this is the big "but" that everyone fears^^) .. but because of the grammar and not using ..how's it called ?  graphical characters ??? .. well, i'm sure you know what i mean .... and because you don't use all that it's really difficult to read ... i'm sure you have the "know how" inside of you is an awesome creative writer .. just let him out ...so what i want to say with that is:
          -write correct and complete sentences
          - use graphic characters
          - use stylistic devices
          
          if you do that, than your story has a great potential ... but as it is now, even i have difficulties reading...there is no stop; no break in your story... and because you don't write in sentences the reader never really knows who's actually talking and ... well ... have you caught my point ?? 
          but as i said at the beginning: the idea of the story is really good and you should definitely not give up ... keep writing =)