Daphne

What do you guys think so far of either story?
          

If you read either story, please tell me what you like or don't like, I would really like to know what you guys think

I updated both stories so read the one you like best, and please comment so that I know wether or not i am wasting my time writing this :) 

Read my new short stroy: A drop of love for my unfortunate soul,
          I promise it's not about vampires :)
          But I do love vampires.