DaraKreme176

Heyyy guyysss! Merry Christmas to all those who celebrate it!! 
          	I'm VERY VERY VERY sorry I haven't updated. I PROMISE you I'm working on getting them updated as SOON as possible. I'm busy because of family coming over for the holidays and everything, so yeah as soon as we finally get to go home, I'll finish up the next chapters for both my stories!! (I'll also try to work on Broken Beauty)
          	Thanks SOOOO much you guyysss! :) ❤️❄️

DaraKreme176

@MariaSoni Um well I have a plan for this thing happening, I'm not going to say it yet, but something happens and then Rachel realizes that they do really care about her. And we have about 11 chapters, I think, left that I have planned for this book before it ends. But there will be a sequel, so yeah. :)
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MariaSoni

@DaraKreme176 how fast
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DaraKreme176

@MariaSoni Yeah! I'll see what I can do! :)
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DaraKreme176

Heyyy guyysss! Merry Christmas to all those who celebrate it!! 
          I'm VERY VERY VERY sorry I haven't updated. I PROMISE you I'm working on getting them updated as SOON as possible. I'm busy because of family coming over for the holidays and everything, so yeah as soon as we finally get to go home, I'll finish up the next chapters for both my stories!! (I'll also try to work on Broken Beauty)
          Thanks SOOOO much you guyysss! :) ❤️❄️

DaraKreme176

@MariaSoni Um well I have a plan for this thing happening, I'm not going to say it yet, but something happens and then Rachel realizes that they do really care about her. And we have about 11 chapters, I think, left that I have planned for this book before it ends. But there will be a sequel, so yeah. :)
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MariaSoni

@DaraKreme176 how fast
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DaraKreme176

@MariaSoni Yeah! I'll see what I can do! :)
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JesseMyLove84

Okay this might sound nerdy but I genuinely love editing.  If you ever want someone to help you go over a chapter or something, I’d be totally down. Only if you’re ever into it though — your writing’s already awesome.

DaraKreme176

@JesseMyLove84 Thank youuu! So does your story! It's SO amazing! :)
            Yeah, when I need help, we can share our emails, because I do agree that email's easier. Thanks so much for helping me!!! :)
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JesseMyLove84

@JesseMyLove84 Yay! I’d love to help you edit — your story has so much potential and I’m really excited for you! ✨
            
            If you ever need help, the easiest way for me to send feedback is through Telegram or even just email if that’s more comfortable for you. Email’s actually a little easier than Telegram for longer stories, but either one works great — whichever you prefer!
            
            No pressure at all — just let me know what works best for you when you’re ready!
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DaraKreme176

@JesseMyLove84 Thanks!! I would LOVE your help when I need it! Yeah, I HATE editing, lol, but I love writing, but thank you! If I ever need help, I'll ask you! (It doesn't sound nerdy :)
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JesseMyLove84

I hope you're updating soon!! :)

JesseMyLove84

@JaxonCarter1 Thank you!!
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DaraKreme176

@JaxonCarter1 I love your stories, too! :)
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JesseMyLove84

@JaxonCarter1 Awesome..glad you're home safe. Can't wait for the next chapter. Love your stories!!
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JesseMyLove84

HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!

DaraKreme176

I will be updating soon! I'm working on typing the next few chapters! So stay tuned!! :)
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MariaSoni

Can you upload another chapter of mini Halstead please
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DaraKreme176

@JaxonCarter1 THANK YOUUU!! You totally made my day!
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JesseMyLove84

Hey, I was curious did you have a favorite board game when you were a kid. Around 6 to 8?

JesseMyLove84

@JaxonCarter1 Interesting never heard of ludo im gonna have to do some research on that
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DaraKreme176

@JaxonCarter1 Board game... maybe Ludo! (I've also liked Monopoly.) I've never really played board games that much, I normally played card games, like UNO! But if I had to choose between Ludo or Monopoly, I would go with Ludo.
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DaraKreme176

Hey guys!
          I have a question for you all! 
          Do you all know FBI International on CBS, and that Jesse Lee Soffer was acting as Wes on it? They ended the series, and they left us with a LOT of cliffhangers, especially about Wes and his half-sister, Delilah. So, I was thinking of maybe making a fan fiction about this!
          It's just, I wanted to see how interested you all would be in this! I'm not planning on writing the story now, but I'd love to know how interested you guys would be in this story and if so, I'd love to hear ideas and suggestions! 
          (Also, in like episode 19, they show a part where Delilah talks to their dad on the phone, and apparently she already knows about Wes, so yeah... And then, in the finale, when Wes meets Delilah, she looks shocked.)
          Tell me what you guys think!

DaraKreme176

Ok! :)
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JesseMyLove84

@DaraKreme176 I'll check the website out!!
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DaraKreme176

@JaxonCarter1 I watch FBI International on CBS website. It'll let you watch the most recent episodes. 
            Thanks! I've been really wanting to write a story about this because the series left us off with a cliffhanger!!
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JesseMyLove84

I just wanted to say a big thanks for always voting on my chapters and leaving comments. Seriously, it means so much and really keeps me motivated to keep writing. Seeing your support pop up all the time totally makes my day. You're awesome. Thank you for sticking with me!

DaraKreme176

@JaxonCarter1 Aww! You're writing is really amazing! You deserve the votes and support!
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JesseMyLove84

If possible, you should write a couple more spanking scenes from Jay, or at least have Will have to follow through and call Jay when she just won't listen to him. If not all good. Either way, I absolutely love this story and can't wait for more. :)

DaraKreme176

@JaxonCarter1 Thanks so much for the suggestions! I'm trying to add more of those scenes in the sequel! So glad you're enjoying it!
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Apex6428

Hey there! Loving how the story is coming along! If you're looking for any help writing a spanking scene, I'm pretty familiar with them and pretty decent at writing them myself and I'd be willing to help out.

DaraKreme176

@Apex6428 Thank you! I'm so glad you're liking my story so far! Thank you! I'd love your help on those scenes, when I need them!
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AceFamily2020

Hi, I have a question Do you know how many chapters in total will Mini Halstead have or still don't know yet

AceFamily2020

@DaraKreme176 no problem glad I can help
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DaraKreme176

@AceFamily2020 Yeah! Thanks for the idea!
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AceFamily2020

@DaraKreme176 it can still happen but the breakdown Rachel have can happen in the sequel same with the video sent to the Intelligence unit. When Rachel get kidnapped she yells out Jay's name
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