SweetKakes99

So far your book is off to a good start. I would suggest that instead of saying “I said” or “he said” use different pronouns such as describe the character that is talking while still developing said character. 
          
          Here’s an example: “Ugh why can’t I sleep in today?!” Exclaims an exhausted Bella as she tossed and turned in her bed.
          
          
          Try doing something like this I promise you your book will be a hit.

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Darasco23

@SweetKakes99 thanks i will try it out and show you.
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