DaringDarling1975

I hate that I have to go back and read my old story "My Troubled Two", just so I can rewrite it. My writing back then was horrendous : (  yeesh

DaringDarling1975

Quick question: what do you think is better first or third person narration?

HorsesandDragons

It depends on the story, such as if it takes place in many different location and you want to jump from one to the other, and if there are many characters you'd like to follow. First person can be limited to one character's conscious, but if you alternate points of view, like if you have two main characters, then you'll get a more 'open' view of the world you create. Third person can also be limited because you don't 'hear' the character's thoughts like you do in first person or it can be harder to go 'in-depth'. 
            
            You could change from first to third person throughout the story too if you want, depending on the chapter and the situation your characters are in.
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DaringDarling1975

Thanks so much for the positive feedback on my last update. 
          So I will be rewriting My Troubled Two, a lot of the first few chapters will probably be the same but with better writing and it'll be more planned out.
          
          I'm so excited to start writing this, thanks for the support!

daddysbbygirl123

U need to update more chapters in ur book The Troubled Two

DaringDarling1975

@daddysbbygirl123 The next update won't be till the 20th because that's the one year anniversary of the book, but it'll definitely be an interesting chapter! Thanks so much for reading my book, I really appreciate!
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