Dark-Queen-Official

HEY EVERYONE!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I MISSED YOU ALL! SORRY FOR BEING TOO DISTANT! JOIN ME ON MY NEW ACCOUNT @ForgottenRain4ever . I have been trying to log into this account but forgot it's password. Today, I was just randomly trying passwords and it logged in!!! Go check my new account and enjoy my books there! LOVE YOU ALL! *GRINS LIKE AN IDIOT* 
          	xoxo, Forgotten Rain!!!!!!!

Dark-Queen-Official

HEY EVERYONE!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I MISSED YOU ALL! SORRY FOR BEING TOO DISTANT! JOIN ME ON MY NEW ACCOUNT @ForgottenRain4ever . I have been trying to log into this account but forgot it's password. Today, I was just randomly trying passwords and it logged in!!! Go check my new account and enjoy my books there! LOVE YOU ALL! *GRINS LIKE AN IDIOT* 
          xoxo, Forgotten Rain!!!!!!!

Dark-Queen-Official

Hey there! I'm really sorry but I'm closing my account. I apologize to all those who read my book so far and to those also who were waiting for the new update and those also who appreciated me. Sorry to say but It's my final word and I will be firm on it unless something changes my mind (hopefully, which won't happen). May God bless you all. Keep smiling. And join @angelapoppe, one of the best writers at wattpad.com to get DAMN INTERESTING books to read. 
          Thanks for your love and appreciation.
          XOXO D.QUEEN:)

prateeikk

Hi there,
          I saw your comment on some book. I like how practical your review was.
          
          I've been working on a epic tale since last 4 years now, and have just put out some chapters for the first time!
          
          I'd love to hear your thoughts on it!
          
          Regards!

prateeikk

@prateeikk Yelled was a typing mistake. I corrected it. Thanks for pointing it out Mary. Also thanks for reading it. I hope you'll like further chapters of my book.
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Dark-Queen-Official

@prateeikk ...i read the first chapter. It was pretty cool. I think you should re-check it before publishing it. In a paragraph, you wrote 'yelped' and then in the next line you wrote ' she yelled even louder'. It doesn't make any sense. ' even louder' can make the readers think that you accidently typed yelled instead of yelped. And you did not mention what she yelled. There are minor mistakes. Although it was interesting, the minor mistakes seem to suck out the interest out of it. The way you started it, was amazing and attractive....Regards, Mary Queen
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Dark-Queen-Official

Dark-Queen-Official

Well rohan, plz comment on my book and give feedback .... keep reading...thnx
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Dark-Queen-Official

sure rohan.... actually it was just the starting you will get your desired stuff (insha allah) ....Thanks.
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ExtremeThinker909

@AlizehWri8s I just read it...It's awesome but it lacked dialogue... please read mine and tell me how's it
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